Sunday, January 19, 2014

Small medium at large - new found fortune
As Lilah grips on the door of her school, her best friend, Alex is chattering animatedly about her new found ability. As the school door opens, Lilah is suddenly overwhelmed by the noises, except for no one is in the hall. She cleared her thought and declared to the ghost that she need them to be quiet to catch up on her study as she headed towards the music room.
    As Lilah practice her drums, her music teacher, mr.Robert walked in and suddenly she can hear a soft female ghost! As she and Mr.Robert talk about their life's and ambition. The voice asks her to ask Mr. Robert about Jet Black Wig. Deciding to trust Mr.Robert Lilah told him all about the fact she is able to hear ghost and ask him about Jet Black Wig. Much to Lilah's surprise he believed her and start to weep like a baby and told her the story of how they were about to sign with a company when their lead singer died and the ghost is their long dead lead singer! The ghost ask him to restart the band as Lilah delivers word of encouragement.
    After music class Lilah decide to start helping people with her gift.
         The voice chosen very nicely, but the character and setting is not written well and I feel the plot is a bit too popular and common.

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