SETTING
Setting in this book is okay. For the first half of the book, not too much is put into it; it's not until Webb sets of on his hike detail in the descriptions goes up a fair bit to describe the surrounding forest and scenery, even then its not too much detail other than occasional moment. A nice thing is how the setting wasn't changing over and over, faster then you can keep up with.Example of not-so-nice detail in the book:
"...the walls were green..."
Example of quite-nice detail in the book:
"...plains were vast and barren, amazing in a sad and desolate way..."
In summary, setting was pretty nicely put and described, but more detail should have been added to all descriptions to allow for a more complete picture to visualize. Nice, but could improve.
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